pages: improve about page
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title: About
-date: 01.01.01
+date: 09.11.20
-giggi.me tries to protect users privacy while the user interacts with it. It
+giggi.me tries to protect users privacy while they interact with the website. It
runs open source software, check the bottom of this page for links.
-It doesn't not store cookies client side. All information associated with the
+It doesn't store cookies on the client side. All information associated with the
user session are kept on the server and destroyed periodically once the user has
left the website.
-Nonetheless, there are other agents that could track the user while trying to
-reach giggi.me up to some extent. For instance, programs running on the client
-end especially if the user comes from a mobile device.
+Nonetheless, there are other agents that could, to some extent, track users
+using giggi.me. For instance, programs running on the client end especially if
+the user comes from a mobile device.
-giggi.me is hosted by [digitalocean](www.digitalocean.com), they could in theory
-run programs server side to monitor and track the user, in addition there are
+giggi.me is hosted by [digitalocean](www.digitalocean.com), which can in theory
+run programs server side to monitor and track the user. In addition, there are
other third party watchers that can generally monitor the traffic transiting in
and out giggi.me.
All traffic generated is encrypted, which doesn't mean it is really secure, but
it's better than plain text.
-What runs on the server is [Apache](https://httpd.apache.org/),
+On the server, the user interacts with [Apache](https://httpd.apache.org/),
[Mysql](https://www.mysql.com/) and [CodeIgniter](https://codeigniter.com/).
-What runs on the client is minimal and comes from
+On the client end there is minimal code that giggi.me runs and it all comes from
[Pelican](https://docs.getpelican.com/en/latest/).